ali
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I wait for freedom, and listen for bells...
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Post by ali on Dec 19, 2009 21:18:33 GMT -5
Poor little Ali is a tragic character. She has been a slave in Dysin's (the goblin king's) palace for two year and it has broken her spirit. She was just bought by the noble and kind Prince Johnathan, however she has no friends.
Even though she was seemingly "saved" by Johnathan, Dysin is still blackmailing her. You see, Johnathan is taking her to Dorian (the fairy king's) palace. Dysin is forcing her to be a spy for him and bring him information about a sword called "Crimnus". If she doesn't do what he says, Dysin says he will kill her sister.
This sister is a younger sibling who was left on her own after Ali was caputred and forced into slavery. She doesn't not know if her sister is even alive and has no way to tell if Dysin is lying or not, but, in the hopes that her sister is still alive, she'll do whetever it takes to keep her safe....even if it means being trapped in Dysin's malevolent plan....forever....
(see? a very sad character *pouty face* poor ali)
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Slepnir
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Post by Slepnir on Dec 28, 2009 0:01:22 GMT -5
Perhaps since Slepnir is a wanderer he could run into Ali's sister? As apathetic as he is he hates goblin and despises slavery soooo, Maybe he could rescue her. If someone could make Ali sister an actual character that would help add to the drama.
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Post by Zephyr on Jan 6, 2010 14:39:53 GMT -5
Actually I fully intend fro her to find out her sister is dead, to keep to her tragic theme. Then, though she'll be sad when she finds out, she'll realize she's free from Dysin and he can blackmail her no more. That's when she can be free to feel free and kill him with Crimnus.
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Slepnir
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Post by Slepnir on Jan 7, 2010 9:59:22 GMT -5
Sounds beautifully tragic.... And poetic.
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ali
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Post by ali on Mar 28, 2011 12:46:19 GMT -5
Ali has jsut found out how to use the sword, and sadly, Dysin can not use it. Once she tells him this, she fears the worst for her and her already dead sister. Now it's Johnathan's turn to step in....ooooh read the thread called "the turning" in the ashed lands and you'll see....oh you'll hate Dysin....you'll hate him. Poor, poor Ali blue eyes...
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ali
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Post by ali on Mar 28, 2011 13:35:05 GMT -5
Now she knows her sister is dead and knows how to use the sword, but as punishment for giving the diary of rue hawkins back to prince johnathan Dysin cut her up, raped her, and bit out her tongue...she is now left for dead, bleeding to death in his bedroom.
Dysin, with the secret of using the sword in his hands...who will save Ali now?
Someone she needs to wake up and be healed...I'm thinking the thread can be put on pause unti we can get Dregunta involved. Maybe she can heal her, knowing she is the one who will end dysin...But since this would be the thread to end the dysin plot, somehow dorian would also need to be there to find out about them being brothers. I don't know where else to go with this thread right now, so it's on pause, but feel free to post!
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Post by Rachel Gavial on Mar 28, 2011 14:41:34 GMT -5
Ah well I guess Dregunta and Wes Masters will have to be there as well. Considering they are the start and finish of the plot. If you get what I mean *wink, wink*
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